Long ago, in japan, there lived an couple who had a dog called Shiro.
The old man & old woman were poor & they lived a simple life. All they wanted was enough money to buy rice for themselves & for Shiro. But year by year their savings grew smaller. They worried that soon there would be no money for rice.
One day the old man & woman were working hard in the gardern. Shiro ran here & there , sniffing the ground. Suddenly, he started digging a hole & barking loudly.
"Be quiet Shiro," said the old woman.
But Shiro kept barking digging, so the old man went to see what the dog had found. He poked a stick into the hole & felt it strike something hard. He dug a little further & uncovered a small box.When the old man opened the box he was amazed to see it was full of golden coins-enough to buy rice for the rest of the year!
But their greedy neighbour heard of this good fortune & he was jealous. He followed Shiro, digging holes wherever the dog sniffed, bt he foun nohing. Finally the neighbour flew into a rage & killed por Shiro.
The old couple cried when they learned that Shiro was dead, for they loved the old dog dearly. Then one night the ghost of Shiro appeared to them.
"You loved & cared for me,"said Shiro's ghost," & now I shall are for you.
Tomorrow, cut down the pine tree in the garden. Mix some splinters from the tree into a tree into a pot of rice."Then the ghost vanished.
The next day the old man chooped down the pine tree & the old woman cooked a pot of rice.She stirred in the splinters & peered into the pot.
"LOOK," she cried, her eyes filled with wonder. "Each grain of rice is turning into a gold coin! We shall have money for rice for the rest of our lives!"
The old couple smiled sadly as they thought of Shiro. Even though he had died, their fathful old dog had not forgotten them.
BY-SHUBHAM BHANDARI
12 comments:
i think u were suppose to write the stories combining different characters of different books.But the story you have written is also very nice.
Your story was too good.It contained a lot of emotions.But yes people would have liked it if there were more number of characters.
YOUR STORY WAS SHORT BUT INTERESTING WELL DONE........... KEEP WRITING-----------
Hi
It was really nice of you to remind me of shinchan and shiro.I really liked your story as it had much of plots to make everyone.As it was first time its okay but next time there i want your story as per the line.Got it.
from saloni
me. Mansi
your story had a excellent conbination of shiro and shinchan.
keep writing.
hi shubham. very good story. i liked your idea of keeping shiro in your story. so keep writting more stories.
hi shubham
ur story was fantastic .the character u chosed was very good, but u could add more of them
best wishes
ankita
hi shubham
coooooolllll story
add more characters.
harsh
It's a very touching story atleast for me. Keep writing more.
Dear Shubham, Story is very good. But whree are those teenage characters of well known stories??
hi shubham
nice story. you wrote your story
nicely.you could have added some more character,but nice one.
keep writin'.
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